Gouren enjoying the heat

Cool. I would try to use some tighter dots for the shading because I think it brings too much attention to the dots and I don't think you would want that much. I mean while shading is meant to be noticeable I don't think it should be obstructing of the drawing which I think it is starting to be here. I mean from a small view it looks good but once enlarged it's like dots. The line shading looks great. The hat I think is needing to be a little bit more pillowy. Right now it kinda looks like he has a bumpy head. Remember that the newspaper boy cap is a bit more soft looking and less snug than a regular baseball cap. It should look a bit like having a small pillow with a brim on one's head. Other than that it looks good.

I hope to see some more Gouren drawings!